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I don't often do this, but just had to share the following thoughtul review about Pictures of You from Star Book Reviews. If you haven't read mah book, give it a try! It's going to be free on Kindle as of Monday for five days...

8 out of 10 stars...it's the top ranked book on the site!

[This review contains some spoilers.]CellarStairs_v4d

Read the blurb and Pictures of You appears to be a typical supernatural young adult suspense, but you don’t have to dig for long to discover a real heart and soul that helps carry this work high above many of its contemporaries. This novel – presented in diary format – is written with a kind of brevity and care that you’ll go a long way to find again.

Despite its dark overtones – and at times I was genuinely surprised at the themes this book explored – every time I returned to reading, I felt as though I was receiving a nice warm hug, in spite of the wrath the story threw at me.

Author T.J. Alexian says that the novel is about learning to accept the ghosts of our past, and for Ashes, our 16-year-old main character, she’ll be forced to face an onslaught before this story is through. Her older brother Daniel passed away some years before this story begins, and both Ashes and her mother are going through the motions of life. How can you ever recover from the loss of a young life?

But her world is rocked when videos filmed on Daniel’s camcorder some years before suddenly begin surfacing on YouTube. The footage is filmed by her brother, but Ashes has never seen these videos before. As the videos increase in number, the mystery deepens. Who is behind this? And, more importantly, why?

In any suspense novel, there is that dreaded line between entertaining your reader, and allowing them room to uncover the mystery for themselves. Pictures of You perfectly balances supernatural and suspense elements, never letting the reader become too passive. While the well paced plot serves to bolster the mystery, the absence of any conceited romance story or typical teenage tropes linked to this genre, are a credit to the novel, providing room to further explore what should be paramount to Ashes: answers.

Ashes is an instantly likeable character, with quick wit and a real charm. She’s suffered immeasurable loss, and at such a young age too. But the way that she composes herself scores empathy points with the reader. She’s a fighter, and she won’t stop for anyone. Sure she has insecurities, who doesn’t? Especially at that age. But her cracks only serve to round out her character. I was never against her. Always beside her. I never felt smarter than her, nor alienated from her world.

The author has spent time painting the various shades of supporting characters, and this helps serve in establishing possible red herrings and dead ends in our growing mystery. However, this reviewer did feel as though some of the hints regarding the outcome could have been handled a little more delicately. Such hints did register alarm bells when they passed my eyes, but having said that, there were other alarm bell moments that elicited similar reactions, and, as it turned out, were simply designed to keep you guessing. I suppose, for authors of suspense, that’s the burden they carry. You can’t do right for doing wrong. The reader will always like to believe they are one step ahead of the author.

Yet, the ‘what’ was not as nearly important as the ‘why’, and it was the ‘why’ that was kept hidden for so long. The revelation was a surprise, but I still had questions. I know why, but I’m still asking why. And the method to the madness is almost brushed away in a few short paragraphs. A shrug and that’s life. While the mystery’s resolution did feel a little rushed, the way in which the narrative’s main theme was tied up, and our main character’s world set on course again was well managed.

In a way, Pictures of You gave me flashbacks to the Goosebumps books that were at their height of popularity in the 90s. That’s not to say that Pictures of You is as simply woven as one of R.L. Stine’s works – It’s not; it has far more weight, subtext and emotional punch, but it is as instantly accessible by young and old alike thanks to the fluid and friendly writing style employed by the author.

Characters are well drawn and welcoming, but the antagonist suffers in the final act, becoming almost one dimensional in its actions, and then quickly an afterthought. I had questions, especially as to what societal motivations led the antagonist to behave as it did, and what in turn that spoke about other characters who may have been aware, or closely tied at one point in time.

In addition, one of the supporting characters is conveniently sidelined while the plot rampages to its conclusion, and yet there I felt that there was more to explore with this character in the conclusion. However, taking the whole work into consideration, these are minor inconveniences in an otherwise solid and inviting tale.

I’ll recommend Pictures of You to you. An enjoyable and moving read. Furthermore, I was pleased to find zero errors or typos in my read through.

SOURCE: http://www.starbookreviews.com/pictures-of-you/

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Best part of my very first author night? Well, actually having it happen, of course. But also, reconnecting with one of my best friends in the world.

No, she's not the one in the photo. That's Kim, who is the owner of Ugly Dog Books, and the person who decided to make Pictures of You the featured book of the month at the store. The book signing was a great experience, and Kim reported back to me at the end of the night that it went really well, too, from her perspective.

Good. I'm glad, because my goal had always been to promote the second book signing on May 10 a bit heavier. I was using Friday's event as a test, to see how things went. One piece of advice that she gave me--that I pass on to other authors--is toi mingle with the patrons, rather than sticking yourself behind a table. Shake hands, talk up the book. It makes for a livelier event.

The hour flew by. There were folks I knew, like Corb of course (who kindly took photos) and Josie, as well as theater friends (one of who shared with me a delicious piece of gossip. It was better than key lime pie!) I tested Kim's advice on some of the patrons I didn't know (and made a few sales as a result), and also got to catch up with some old friends who I wouldn't have seen if I hadn't been at the book signing. It really was the best of both worlds.

The best was seeing my old friend Joyce, who was the first person I made friends with my freshman year of high school and someone who has always been in my life since then. Oh, we've had some periods where we don't speak for months at a time, but we always reconnect and the friendship is always as strong as it was...and that's not something you can say about everyone in your life.

I can honestly say Joyce has been a huge influence in my writing style. She has a great sense of humor and an uncanny knack for the absurd. In fact, everything I wrote in my first few years of high school were with her in mind. And then, when I was ready to step out and have other people see my stuff (I wrote two plays that were performed in high school on stage, one of which won an award from The Boston Globe), Joyce was still the first person to read it, and also, someone who had a sharp sense of what needed to be reworked or edited. To this day, when I write something ridiculous, I often channel her (yes, SHE's to blame).

More than just the inspiration, though, has been the friendship. If I had a dime for every hour we spent on the phone laughing over silly things in high school and college I would be a rich man! Of course, back in those days, ours phones were chained to the walls by plastic cords and the emails we would send each other were crafted from paper and ink. Primative times, but of course, the one advantage is, I still have many of those letters to this day.

A lot of times, Joyce would read my stories and plays in high school and criticize them by writing under the pen name of Melvin A . Padoodle, my alleged therapist. So naturally, when she brought her copy of Pictures of You over to me on Friday night, I asked her whether I should it should be addressed to Melvin.

"That quack?" she replied. "No, make this one out to ME."

After the signing was done, we invited Joycey to go out with us for dinner at my favorite Mexican restaurant, and then invited her over to hang at Green Victoria. Of course, that visit stretched to around one in the morning.

"I like having Joyce around," Corb said as we were going to bed that night. "You two laugh like you are still in high school."

Yeah. I like that feeling, too. It's good to have friends who know you from way back when. I am blessed to have quite a few of them.

"Some friendships are meant to last a lifetime," I wrote in Pictures of You. I know exactly who I was referring to when I wrote that, too.

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